Best Mystery Novelist Around

Sorry I'm late again ;0;
Plus I can't use Paint tool sai for now so I can't even use pictures this time T^T

The eyeline
It should be bolder y'know, the same as I told you last time

The legs
-They seem...small? Unlike the rest of the body they seem to be smaller and make the whole body look smaller in the end as well
Maybe the whole pelvis is small _{ehehe I'm not sure sorry-}
OR
The head
-If you don't exactly know what I meant in the-legs-part you can try to make the head smaller next time instead

Hands
-I have no right to correct someone about hands since I can't draw them properly myself but when drawing clenched fists you should draw a knuckles too- the hands won't seem so 'round-like' if you do

The eyes
-I don't know if this is part of your art style but you always do the eyes look so 'widen'. It's because you draw the iris too small.

Thiiis time I gotta praise you :'D
- I really like the shading on the sweater (or vest?- don't really know what it is )
The use of colours is great UvU